This letter has a quite a few problems. The first being that it is a little long in the tooth. But I'm stuck with what I should cut short and what I should fill in!
The focus of the letter is meeting the Stranger whilst establishing a new sense of place....But cramming all these in makes the letter seem...well Crammed.
But enjoy reading! And I'll keep plugging away at editing!
oh my goodness. I am having such PROBLEMS with MY COMPUTER...I have no idea how to format my letter...I keep trying to and it ends up all wierd.....
ReplyDeleteI see what you mean. I always just copy and paste and cross my fingers. No worries. Its still readable. exciting.
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