This letter has a quite a few problems. The first being that it is a little long in the tooth. But I'm stuck with what I should cut short and what I should fill in!
The focus of the letter is meeting the Stranger whilst establishing a new sense of place....But cramming all these in makes the letter seem...well Crammed.
But enjoy reading! And I'll keep plugging away at editing!
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Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Thursday, September 9, 2010
letter number two.
Well, I did Letter Number two. It was hideous trying to edit. I'm sure there are more mistakes in it than I care to correct. So please, any suggestions, corrections,ect, feel free to make!
and above all, enjoy reading it!
Letter #2
and above all, enjoy reading it!
Letter #2
Monday, September 6, 2010
A new page.... and a letter!
Happy Day!
I've finally decided to actually work on revising. Amazing. I know. So, where did I start?
Why the beginning of course.
Here's the link: Letter #1. Make any critiques, criticisms, suggestions, opinions, questions, queries or observations about it in the comments.
Enjoy.
P.S. Tag you're it Terrwyn.
I've finally decided to actually work on revising. Amazing. I know. So, where did I start?
Why the beginning of course.
Here's the link: Letter #1. Make any critiques, criticisms, suggestions, opinions, questions, queries or observations about it in the comments.
Enjoy.
P.S. Tag you're it Terrwyn.
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